Thursday, May 9, 2013

A NYT bestselling author shares: 6 Things Pro Writers Taught Me About Writing

Before I was a NYT bestselling author, I was an editor (Dell, Bantam, Kensington) and worked with lots of writers. Some work first thing in the AM, others in the PM, some don’t get started until midnight. Some write sober, some don’t. Some write on a computer, some on legal pads, and these days some write on tablets. Some edit as they go along, perfecting each sentence before going on to the next. Some keep strict, almost corporate office hours, some write irregularly but in hot rushes of productivity.
Others power through a first draft as fast as they can, then go back to edit and revise. Some outline in detail; some prepare elaborate storyboards, others work from a jotted list of scribbled notes; still others let the characters do the work. Some brainstorm the plot with a trusted friend, spouse or editor. Some work with a crit partner getting comments and guidance along the way; others won’t let anyone see their work until it’s finished.
Bottom line, there’s no ONE way to get the job done.

No matter where, when or how writers write, though, professional writers have taught me the following:

Let yourself goDon’t kill your darlings, kill your inhibitions instead.

Get rid of the inner censor, that stern, humorless second-guessing nay-sayer that kills your ideas before they’re born. That killjoy is telling you your idea is too outrageous, too unbelievable, too OTT to see the light of day?

Don't listen. Tune him out, shout her down.

Don’t quash that zany/loony/nutty idea; instead, let it rip. Play with it and see where it goes. The “unspeakable,” the “unbelievable,” the OMG! “you can’t write that,” are exactly the ideas that lead to the fresh, original breakthrough. Considering every possibility, no matter how OTT, is the reason TV writers’ rooms are noted for Raunch & Irreverence. The reason? R & I break through the conventions, the “should’s, don'ts and can’ts” that destroy creativity.

Learn to edit yourself.

Heresy coming from a former editor, I know, but professional writers are often excellent editors of their own work. After years of experience, they have learned to recognize their strengths and weaknesses and figured out effective work-arounds.  Their approach is practical: what works stays, what doesn’t work hits the cutting room floor; aka the delete button.

 The ability to self-edit comes with time and experience but it’s a goal for beginning writers to keep in mind. Consider your book from the POV of a marriage, not a hot affair. Spouses get to know each other very well, are aware of all the plusses and minuses and still love each other. Take off the rose-colored glasses of passionate romance, marry your book instead and live happily ever after.

Butt in chair. Feet on ground.

Most of the professional authors I’ve known don’t clutter their minds with undefined notions of “relevance,” “significance” or “art.” Instead, they are experienced, disciplined and competent storytellers and entertainers who understand that craft matters.

Great books are about characters, plot, setting, if “art” is the outcome, so much the better but, as in building a house, don’t rely on a gauzy fantasy when what you need is a hammer and some nails.

Master your genre.

Successful writers whether of horror, romance, thrillers or mystery study their genre. They know what their readers expect and they do NOT let them down. Period.
  • No unhappy endings for romances. Readers want the HEA & that's what the pro delivers.
  • No “revelation” at the end that the whole book, the characters and their trials and tribulations, was the MC’s dream. We're talking compelling fiction here, not a shaggy dog story.
  • No tearing up in tough-guy noir. Hard edges, dammit!
  • No weepy heart-to-heart confessions in action thrillers. Paranoia is the WTG because paranoia works & paranoia is what the reader wants. Disappoint him or her at your peril.

Don't think you can reinvent the wheel. Pros know better.

Rescue yourself.

One of the great old-time pulp writers (200+ books) once told me “Each book is a pain in the ass in a different way.”  What he meant was that at some point each one is going to present a problem.
  • A plot going nowhere.
  • A boring/clueless/addled/DebbieDowner character.
  • Too much/not enough background/research.
  • Too long.
  • Too short.
  • You name it, sometime, somewhere in the course of writing a book, you will most likely get stuck.
Professional writers have learned how to bail themselves out. Whether it means going back to the beginning to hunt down the problem, a light rewrite, some strategic revisions, a personality transplant (for a character, not the writer—lol), the pros have learned how to deal with the glitches, get themselves out of trouble and get back on track.

Write. Write a lot. Then write some more.

Seriously. Professional writers turn out copy, they meet deadlines, they get the job done and the more they write the better they get. Same with any job, career or profession.

Do you want a surgeon who’s just out of med school or one who’s done hundreds of knee/hip replacements? See what I mean?

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  1. Boy, you nailed it...kill your inhibitions! That's my biggest problem. At times, I feel like a scene is too over the top or implausible, or I shouldn't use a particular word. Thanks for this!

  2. Jen—Thank you for the kind words. I've been-there-done-that. What I found is that you should just write the damn thing and *then* go back and edit/revise/tone it down if you've really gone OTT. The point at which your words/ideas scare you is the point at which real creativity can break through. Scary at first, for sure. But remind yourself we are dealing in words, not actions. Mega difference! HTH

  3. I have one word. "Amen!"
    Okay, two more. "Well said!"
    And one emoticon. :)

    1. Awwwww. Thanks so much, Carmen! :-)